First line
Second Line
Third Line
Fourth Line
Last Second Line
New Second Line
Last Fourth Line
New Fourth Line
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Last Second Line
Original Second Line
Last Fourth Line
Original First Line
The structured repetitions produce a hypnotic trance state. I will try to find examples of them.
1 comment:
If you're still looking for an example you could use one of the several written by Sydney poet (and friend), Greg McLaren.
There a copy of his "Everything Falls In"
here.
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